things I lost in the Fire
- Pictures of you... the ones i never had.
- Pictures of us... the us that never existed, the pictures which just could not be.
- Letters you wrote... it was never like you to write any letters to me.
- Gifts you gave... even those that were never delievered.
- Flowers... the ones you never gave but i dried nonetheless.
- A pen... you used for writing me the now charred letters.
- A pillow... the one which you once rested your head on.
- A watch... the one that clocked only the time we spent apart.
- A chair... the one i am sitting on.
- Memories... of everything you ever said to me and the ones you never mentioned.
- me... for how could i be without everything that i was?
1 comment:
I wrote a comment but it seems to have been lost somewhere.
Nyways.. i'll repeat it in short :)
I loved your art of picking the right articles to subject to fire as each has an important effect in its own regard.
A last line mentioning "all you gained from fire was Pain" would give a master finish to this perfect write up :)
I liked it and will visit often.
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